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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:49 pm    Post subject: A test raw draft new song Reply with quote

I was definitely influenced by that latest Radiohead album, although it may not sound like it.

This is a test raw draft of the song. Everything about the song is a draft. Anything in it is subject to change. The vocal takes you're hearing are pre-placeholder vocals--it's literally when I was first coming up with the melody, so bear with that. No real lyrics at all yet--haven't started on them yet, I JUST got parts written for the section 3/4 into the song.

The mix is awful too. Note the "lovely" vocals on the left side.

I'm just basically showing this to give you a really really rough idea of a new song.

http://www.kizzume.com/early-october-beta-1.mp3
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sweet. I think you are a great singer man, and I like your integration of melodies (The bassline compliments the over fullness of the song immensely.) The one thing I thought was missing was a little guitar, so i decided to throw that in for the first minute.

I literally just picked up my guitar and played along for the first minute, so don't expect some Joe Satriani. No effects, maybe not even fully in tune, as I said, just decided to jam along and bring some guitar to the mix.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=0ZY1YBY6

Anyway, I think your music is super cool. I am sure when you start playing with your band you will have guitar anyway Razz

PS, I hope it doesn't offend you that I jammed along with track. I in no way am trying to rape your song.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What's the download link? That takes me to a site where I can see the filename and I can download a download manager.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

To the right of the MEGAUPLOAD text there is a section where it says "Please Enter" and it gives you a little code to enter. Enter the code to the right of it, and then to the right of that there is a "download" button to click.

That is the one minute clip of your song with me jamming on guitar.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

And I forgot to mention: Thanks Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Do I have to download a special plugin?
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

no sir.There are just a lot of popups and stuff because it is a free site and that is how they pay for it. I PMED you the rest of the details. It should help. Also, the file I sent you is in WMA format, so no need for a special format, just need windows media (my pro tools MP3 thing expired so now I do it in WMA
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sorry about the confusion. I don't think I will be using mega-upload again. I have never had this problem before, but it is doing the same thing to me.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it's funny how their page advertises as "better than youtube". Better? Aaaaaaallrighty then.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah no kidding. Better how? But if you were looking for a hard to find vid, and it wasn't on youtube, it is good to know you have another resource you could look into for it. I know Youtube just recently removed all their full episodes of aqua teen. Never know, they may be on megavideo!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Because of how hard the networks are coming down on that sort of thing, it doesn't seem likely that in the near future that you will be able to get any of those things without using illegal torrents or other filesharing methods which are probably going to be replace with other filesharing methods soon. It's going to become a more and more elite thing as time moves on.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's exactly why I have full ROM sets. Try to find a copy of Super Mario World (SNES) without a torrent (and now some major torrent sites don't have it as well). Things already aren't how they were just a year ago.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm still really amazed at how much that Radiohead album has affected me.
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